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Benjamin Franklin says it all: “I have already made this paper too long, for which I must crave pardon, not having now time to make it shorter.” Henry David Thoreau wrote, “Not that the story need be long, but it will take a long while to make it short.”
The most common question which pops up in various contests I’ve judged, is: “My story is longer than the guideline’s length. May I submit it all?”
No! Writing short requires a much-needed skill. Revise so your story is written succinctly.
Below is advice on writing a short story of 100 words. It can be applied to all stories.
My favorite tidbit is this: “Think of the story in terms of a question and answer.”
Your answer will become the plot of your story. But brainstorm lots of options! If it’s too easy, your option may be too convenient.
http://www.rdasia.com/how-to-write-story-100-words
Writing Prompt:
1. Take a story you’ve written and tighten it. Can you cut out 100 words? More? Once you challenge yourself, the process can be fun and addicting!
2. Read your story aloud. Where have you “told” information? Can you show it with an action verb instead?
3. Choose a poem you’ve created and do the process of #1 and #2. Is the end result more vivid?
Cutting out vague words sharpens your writing and respects the reader to make conclusions. Use this new technique with all of your writing!
I turned the page of my book, soaking in the story, silence, and reveling in peaceful solitude. Not total solitude, since my Yorkie, Zoie’s rhythmic breathing relaxed me as she slept in my lap.
MOO!
Straightening up with a jerk, I woke my deaf dog.
What was a mooing cow doing INSIDE this room?
Could it have been from an electronic device? Perhaps my husband neglected to take his phone with him. I smiled at the irony of this sound in my suburban California home. Maybe Dad was saying hello from the other side? He spent the first half of his life farming with dairy cows in southeastern Wisconsin, and as a baby and toddler I lived on that family farm, too. Hi Dad, I thought, glad he’d retained his sense of humor.
As I settled back into my story, Zoie, reassured by my calm demeanor, snoozed again.
MOO!
The realistic animal sound came from our family room cupboard. I got up to investigate. Nothing in the stacks of paper, pens, and recipes gave a hint to the mystery. Old video tapes didn’t look as though they’d moo, either. But when I reached Zoie’s dog toys, I knew the puzzle’s answer. A black and white fabric ball must contain the noisemaker. Although it hadn’t worked in years, and I didn’t know it had held a noise device when I threw it in the washing machine, that process could have reactivated it.
Or.
Dad greeted me.
I prefer this answer.
Whenever we try to make this ball produce sound effects, nothing happens. But on its own . . .
MOO!
Writing Prompts:
1. What signs or symbols can you discover within the book you’re reading? Through their repetition, what is its underlying meaning?
2. What sign or symbol can you develop within the project you’re writing? Through carefully placed repetition, your motif may strengthen your theme, characters, and/or plot.
3. Create an artistic representation of your symbol. How does it relate to you? Perhaps this may become another layer of its meaning.
While examining tide pools at the coast, I hopped from one wet, slippery rock to another. Down I fell . . . Bam!
As I lay on my back in the water and stones, pain throbbed from my knees, legs elbow and back. But relief did too. Nothing was broken. Within seconds, Bob stood above me, screaming.
“Get up! Get up! Get up!”
Starring into the blue sky, I reassured him. “I’m fine, really. Water seeped from the tide pools into my clothes. My back felt each stone and rock.
“Get up! Get up! Get up!”
“Bob, I just can’t pop up. I need a moment.”
A wrinkled face appeared on the opposite side of where Bob stood. “Take your time,” said the stranger, his voice soothing me and my anxious husband. “There is no rush.”
Then I noticed a crowd gathered around me. Many sets of eyes peered down. I could imagine their thoughts. “Would she get up? Do we call an ambulance?” As white clouds floated by I wondered if this was similar to a death watch. Then another strange thought popped through my aches. Did I hurt any marine life in the tide pools below me?”
Perhaps I groaned as I steadied myself into a sitting position before rising.
“Shall I take I take you to the hospital?” Bob said.
“I’m fine,” I said. “Just banged up.”
Later, while recounting the incident, Bob said, “I yelled ‘Get up?’ Really?”
And me? Bruised and battered, I walked with a ‘hitch in my get-up’ as my Aunt Mary would have described. My knees and shins swelled to twice their normal size. My entire legs looked like I had been in a boxing ring.
But.
I was fine.
Writing Prompts:
1. Write about two characters in a traumatic scene. How do each of them react?
2. Take that scene and slow-down-the-moment, using your senses. Over-write the piece!
3. Next, choose the best tense. (Past? Present? Future?) As you rewrite, choosing which senses are the most important, and verbs which are active.
“If they give you ruled paper, write the other way.” Juan Ramon Jimenez
In kindergarten, my son’s teacher gave each student a construction paper Christmas stocking along with decorations. Their assignment? Cut them out and glue them too look like her example.
A couple other mother-volunteers and I entered the room while teacher and class were on the playground for recess.
“Look at all their stockings,” said one mom.
Each stocking was hung, identically in a row along the wall. They could have been mimeographed in their sameness.
“Wow,” said the other mom, observing one stocking decorated with magic marker Christmas figures on the tiny white edge of the stockings’ perimeter.
“Who did that one?” said the first mom.
They peered closely at the small signature.
It was Tofer.
I write this anecdote not to brag, but to show how one five-year-old figured a way to be creative even with a cut and paste assignment.
How will you show your individuality with your writing or art?
Writing Prompts:
1. Select one of your scenes you’ve already written. How can you make it yours and only yours?
2. Make one of your characters quirky. What distinguishes this character from every other one in your book? A particular secret, trait, or passion may allow her to be amusing or annoying or lovable!
3. Create a setting that shows its character. Being specific creates identifiable reactions and emotions within your readers. Can you show nostalgia? A comfort setting? A suspenseful place? Remember sounds, smells and even tastes will allow your readers to feel like they are there.